I am a student at Ellesmere College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
The kitten that would like some attention, so he pretended to be stuck in the blinds. His mum just walked away, so he got out of the blinds. So he tried and tried and tried and then he gave up.
The end of the story.
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Please structure you comments as follows: Positive - Telling Nick he did something well Thoughtful - A sentence to let Nick know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give Nick ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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Please structure you comments as follows:
Positive - Telling Nick he did something well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let Nick know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give Nick ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about