I am a student at Ellesmere College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
What a clever idea to make a venn diagram for this activity! I haven't seen anyone else do that yet. Venn diagrams are a simple way to show similarities/differences between two or more things, and you have used it well. Ka pai!
What else do you think a house and a wharepuni have in common? Think about who lives there/what they are used for.
I really like how you organised your ideas into a simple venn diagram. What tool did you use to make that diagram? It looks super neat.
I would say that for similarities, you can live in both houses - modern house and wharepuni. Also both houses will keep you warm and dry - you can hide from the sun and the rain.
For differences, I don't think wharepuni has a toilet inside... what do you think? Our modern house has wifi and electricity but I don't think wharepuni has wifi to connect to your chromebook. Perhaps you could think of few more and let me know :)
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Hi Nick,
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever idea to make a venn diagram for this activity! I haven't seen anyone else do that yet. Venn diagrams are a simple way to show similarities/differences between two or more things, and you have used it well. Ka pai!
What else do you think a house and a wharepuni have in common? Think about who lives there/what they are used for.
Hazel :)
Hey Nick,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you organised your ideas into a simple venn diagram. What tool did you use to make that diagram? It looks super neat.
I would say that for similarities, you can live in both houses - modern house and wharepuni.
Also both houses will keep you warm and dry - you can hide from the sun and the rain.
For differences, I don't think wharepuni has a toilet inside... what do you think?
Our modern house has wifi and electricity but I don't think wharepuni has wifi to connect to your chromebook. Perhaps you could think of few more and let me know :)
I hope to hear back from you!
All the best,
Jade C.
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