I am a student at Ellesmere College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
What a brilliantly designed ute. I like how you have thought about everything including logistics and potential obstacles that need to be overcome. It would definitely be a great asset to have for hunting and evading traffic jams. The suspension will be of great value.
Have you considered making the ute camouflage so you can be incognito while hunting. What would you go hunting for?
Perhaps you could include labels of what you’ve changed so your readers can easier see what you would like to change.
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Kia Ora Nick,
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliantly designed ute. I like how you have thought about everything including logistics and potential obstacles that need to be overcome. It would definitely be a great asset to have for hunting and evading traffic jams. The suspension will be of great value.
Have you considered making the ute camouflage so you can be incognito while hunting. What would you go hunting for?
Perhaps you could include labels of what you’ve changed so your readers can easier see what you would like to change.
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)