I am a student at Ellesmere College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Nick I like the way you and Jordon followed the instruction for making your space apple pie. I thought you both took turns at speaking. My question is - you said you were making apple pies. Did you put apples in the space food or did I miss that part? Nana
Please structure you comments as follows: Positive - Telling Nick he did something well Thoughtful - A sentence to let Nick know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give Nick ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Nick I like the way you and Jordon followed the instruction for making your space apple pie. I thought you both took
ReplyDeleteturns at speaking. My question is - you said you were making apple pies. Did you put apples in the space food or
did I miss that part? Nana